So one of my more recent writing assignments was to write a fiction story. Here it is! Based off a really story, the main character, Gracie is kinda based of me when I was a little girl! It is kinda long but I had fun writing this and hope you enjoy reading it!
Enjoy
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A
Story of Truth
Laughing,
playing, acting, singing. These words describe Grace Lynn Acre. Grace or
Gracie, as many called her, could be defined as a spunky energetic little girl
of five. Having nothing to do or missing out on fun was just terrible. When
people asked Gracie, “What do you want to do when you grow up?” Gracie would
reply, “An actress.” Sandwiched between her thirteen year-old sister Alice and three
year-old sister Amelia, Gracie almost always had someone to play with. In a
family of three girls one has to be a princess and Gracie definitely held that
position. The cozy Acre home, nicely situated in the back bay of Newport, provided
Grace with many memorable adventures. Although she loved paddling around the
bay in her family boat or climbing trees, Gracie’s favorite activity remained putting
on her tiara and playing princess. Grace’s father, Mr. Scott Acre, the Manager
of North American Product Management of Caloa Parts, held a position as a
mechanical engineer. Though Gracie did not know what his title meant, she loved
rattling it off to anyone who would listen. Gracie’s mother, Mrs. Lindsey Acre,
specialized in clothing design. Besides creating new fashion ideas, Lindsey
found time to also homeschool her kids and do all the other things mothers do.
Gracie was usually a good girl, but sometimes her
pleasant demeanor became tainted by naughtiness. It did not happen often, but
her most recent trouble went like this…
“Girls,
I need to go to Costco. Do you need anything?” asked Mrs. Acre as she put on
some lipstick and grabbed her purse.
“Milk!”
shouted Alice over the noisy brown vacuum she operated.
“Brown
cookies!” exclaimed Amelia, her way of saying Oreos.
On
her way to door, Lindsey stopped to check in on Gracie who, in bed, was getting
over a slight cough. As she walked out of her invalid’s room she wrote down,
peppermint tea and cough drops on her grocery list and shouted a farewell to
the three girls. Gracie hated being sick. To this little five-year old, lying
in bed doing nothing was torture.
This is
no fun. I want to play with Marilyn.
Marylyn
Klinger had become Gracie’s best friend in every respect. Both girls were five years-old
princesses loving activity, constantly seeking adventure, and amusing people.
One might call them two peas in a pod. Grace and Marylyn looked similar too.
Not only had they known each other forever, they lived next door to one
another.
An idea suddenly
popped into Grace’s busy mind,
I will
sneak out and play with Marilyn and come back before anyone notices.
The monotonous noise
of the vacuum cleaner had stopped and Gracie could hear Amelia sing in her baby
voice. Time to act.
Quietly,
little Gracie slipped out of her bed and tip-toed to her dresser where she kept
her treasures. On top lay her most prized possession, a “real” diamond tiara
she had gotten for her fifth birthday. Carefully taking her diadem down, the
little princes placed it on her head. Next she went to her mother’s room,
opened a tall mirrored closet, and took out a light blue silk bath robe, which she
and her mother cherished. Finding Mrs. Acre’s fuzzy white slippers under her
parent’s king sized bed, she slid them on.
A few more things and I can get
going, Gracie thought.
Going
to the school room she opened a drawer of crayons. She left with red colored
waxy nails. Grace decided that her eye lashes had grown too long, after
examining herself in the bathroom mirror. No problem. Without another thought
she took up some sharp hair cutting scissors and closing one eye, carefully cut
her eyelashes. Something on the counter caught her eye. It was her mom’s makeup
box. Grace eagerly examined the contents and took out a black pencil. This she
used on her brown eyebrows.
Show time.
A
new Grace peeped out from behind a white bathroom door.
She
heard a hall door open and held her breath. Gracie’s brown eyes followed Alice carefully
carrying Amelia to bed.
The
coast was clear.
So
the floor would not squeak, Gracie hugged the wall and expertly avoided all
loose boards. Out of the house, through a lush back yard, past a wooden gate. The
little escape artist had successfully escaped. Leaping over a two inch brick
divider, Grace ran up to the blue front door of the Klinger house, out of
breath. The thrill excitement hung in the air. A few knocks on the door brought
Mrs. Klinger as well as loud barks from their two Papillion dogs, Ella and
Billy.
“Grace,
come in,” said Mrs. Klinger kindly, just as the house phone rang. One could not
help but notice the peculiar outfit the little girl wore and that her eyebrows
had gone a few shades darker.
An
appearance from either girls at each other’s houses, at almost any time of day,
was not unusual. Her friend Marylyn heard her from upstairs and did not waste
any time but slid down a slippery stair banister and landed in a heap in front
of Grace.
“Rise,”
commanded Grace in a most imperial tone.
Both
girls laughed and ran outside to the Back Bay to play Princesses. Ominous black
clouds hung from a painted grey sky. It looked like rain. Unperturbed, both girls
ran laughing with joy and excitement through rippling yellow grass, its long
blades hitting their faces. Out of breath, they reached the top of a hilly
slope to check out the calm view that lay before them. Sea gulls flew, crying obnoxiously
overhead. Floating in the bay was a bulky black dredger. “An eye sore,” both girls
dubbed it. Murky brown salt water calmingly lapped the shore. The Whirring from
a plane’s propellers overhead told both girls that a plane had just taken off
from John Wayne Air Port, located three miles from their current location. After
taking in a little more salt air and watching the view a while longer, the
princesses decided to climb a singular tree, and pretended it belonged to one
of their grand castles in their massive and entirely imaginary kingdom.
“Jump, your royal highness!” exclaimed Marylyn
to Grace. “Barbarians have started to scale our walls! We must escape. Our brave
and honorable knights can hold them back no longer.”
Holding
hands they closed their eyes and jumped. The ripping sound of cloth hit their
ears before their feet landed in slimy greenish mud. Squish! Overwhelmingly
terrible, the smell of decaying mud hit their noses.
“Oh
no,” cried both princess in distress.
Looking
behind her Grace surveyed remnants of her lovely train now of which hung
tauntingly from the tree. A downward glance amid towards her feet revealed
slippers lavishly coated with smelly and gooey mud. Dismayed both girls looked
at each other. Sea gulls stopped crying, grass stopped swaying, and water
stopped lapping at the shore. Silence.
“I think I should go home now,” said Princess
Grace after “a few hours."
At
that moment three cold water droplets hit her nose. She ran home and took off
her slippers entering the house just as it started to pour. Tiptoeing to her
room, Grace shut her door, breathing hard. To tell the truth or to not tell the
truth? This single question whirled in her mind. It did not take long for
Gracie to realize that this had been a bad idea.
If I tell mommy than I will be in
deep yogurt because not only did I get out of bed, I ripped her bathrobe, dirtied
her slippers, and snuck over to play with Marylyn without asking. But mommy
always said to tell the truth. Oh dear, Oh dear, OH DEAR.
Grace
quickly got changed in the bathroom and scrubbed red crayon off her finger
nails. A glance at the mirror revealed she still possessed jet-black eyebrows.
After a vigorous scouring of her eye brows, a sigh issued from her lips.
To tell the truth or to not tell
the truth.
She placed both soiled slippers and bathrobe
in a pink laundry basket. At that moment, Gracie heard the front door open up.
“I’m
home girls,” said Lindsey. “Help put the groceries away.” Her heart pounding,
Grace made up her mind. Running out of her room to the kitchen, where it had
become all bustle and hurry to put away items, she stood first on one foot and
then the other.
“Gracie,
how are you feeling?” exclaimed Mrs. Acre.
“Not
very good Mommy,” said a nervous little Gracie.
“Do
you still have a cough? I bought some peppermint tea for you,” her mom replied.
“No Mommy, I did something really bad. I am so sorry,” cried Gracie.
“What
happened?” asked a loving yet grieved mother.
Then
she told her mother everything that she had done to the last detail, much like
you read it. During Gracie’s narrative, Mrs. Acre hid a smile. After talking to
a most preventative Gracie, she said, “I believe you learned your lesson today
and feel sorry for what you did. I also think that it would not hurt you to
work in order to make up for the slippers and robe. I need help with dinner and
weeding. You know Grace, you are not much different than me when I was little.
I did many things like that when I was younger too!”
With
that she gave her princess a big hug. What went on between them was sweet, for daughter
repented and her mother forgave. Robe and slippers never were heard of again
but if you go into Gracie’s room you will find them still dirty, now lying on
the dresser next to her tiara as a reminder. Gracie learned that day, telling
the truth is of greatest importance and the result of doing so is was
wonderful.
WoW!! Impressive. I have to say, I was into the story. That must have taken a lot of effort. I want more!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank-you! It actually was not too hard to write as I had a real story to go by(:
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